Commenting the Wrong Way
"I must say, this is a striking image. It possesses such a bright, color-rich atmosphere and I just can't take my eyes off of it. However, I think you could have invested more time in defining the proportions during the early stages of the work because one of the girl's hands appears slightly larger than the other, even though it's further away. You may also want to consider the placement of light sources in the picture before applying the shading. While the light really brings it to life, it's coming from the wrong direction. Setting that aside, I think it's a beautiful picture. Keep up with the good work!"
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"This seems to have taken a good amount of time and I've seen improvement in your work. The only thing I can mention is the proportions are a bit off. I saw a lovely tutorial on proportions with expressions here [link]
Good luck and I think with a little more work you'll be even better!
Commenting the Right Way
* "cool."
* "First comment!"
* "OMG SOOO CUTE!! *hugs*
* "AAAAAAAAAAH THIS IS SO WRONG!!!ONE". (Add more than 20 emoticons of your choice for full effect.)
* "SUGOI KAWAII DESU NE!"
* "This bad bad! But I like cause is sexy. They go bed and sex!
* "Yaoi! Yay! But Inuyasha is mine!"
Deviantart is not about the art, it's about the comments.
Deviantart is not about the art, it's about the comments.
* "I love that show!"
* "(:"
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* "A++++++ WOULD FAVE AGAIN"












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Dont worry about your originality. You could not get rid of it even if you wanted to. It will stick to you and show you up for better or worse in spite of all you or anyone else can do - Robert Henri -
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Dont worry about your originality. You could not get rid of it even if you wanted to. It will stick to you and show you up for better or worse in spite of all you or anyone else can do - Robert Henri -
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Harena of ~woozalia
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Look, it would save me a lot of time if you just gave up and went mad now.
The sound of pain is muted by a thousand living strings.
*ferret cackles*
*waves at Rackle*
Thanks for the
Harena of ~woozalia
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