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Fri Oct 9, 2009, 12:43 AM
From Encyclopedia Dramatica's dA entry - I love dA, but it's great for a laugh xD

Commenting the Wrong Way

"I must say, this is a striking image. It possesses such a bright, color-rich atmosphere and I just can't take my eyes off of it. However, I think you could have invested more time in defining the proportions during the early stages of the work because one of the girl's hands appears slightly larger than the other, even though it's further away. You may also want to consider the placement of light sources in the picture before applying the shading. While the light really brings it to life, it's coming from the wrong direction. Setting that aside, I think it's a beautiful picture. Keep up with the good work!"

Or

"This seems to have taken a good amount of time and I've seen improvement in your work. The only thing I can mention is the proportions are a bit off. I saw a lovely tutorial on proportions with expressions here [link]
Good luck and I think with a little more work you'll be even better! :)"



Commenting the Right Way

* "cool."
* "First comment!"
* "OMG SOOO CUTE!! *hugs*
* "AAAAAAAAAAH THIS IS SO WRONG!!!ONE". (Add more than 20 emoticons of your choice for full effect.)
* "SUGOI KAWAII DESU NE!"
* "This bad bad! But I like cause is sexy. They go bed and sex! :D "
* "Yaoi! Yay! But Inuyasha is mine!"
Deviantart is not about the art, it's about the comments.
Deviantart is not about the art, it's about the comments.
* "I love that show!"
* "(:"
* :iconlarryplz:
* "A++++++ WOULD FAVE AGAIN"

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:iconwilddamon:
Yay, thankee for the :+fav:! :D

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:iconwolfke74:
Just to say I featured you in my journal:[link] :headbang:

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:iconarcanerabbit:
Whoa! Awesome! I've never been in anyones journal before! Cool, thanks! :D
:iconwolfke74:
It is a pleasure, it is my quest now to feature artists that are really good but doesn't get the attention they deserve. It doesn't matter how many artworks you have,if they are off good quality, it deserves also quality attention. Have a super day ArcaneRabbit and enjoy!!! :D :headbang:

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Don’t worry about your originality. You could not get rid of it even if you wanted to. It will stick to you and show you up for better or worse in spite of all you or anyone else can do - Robert Henri -
:iconwilddamon:
Ello! I haven't seen you much lately. Too much insane uni busybusyness...

How's it going?

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:iconarcanerabbit:
:D Yeah something like that. It's not too bad. Im writing my proposal. Its icky. o_o
:iconwoozalia:
oh! and also thankee for the :+fav: on Tricorn Hat :dance:


Harena of ~woozalia

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:iconmadkatter:
:O I'm being watched...

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:iconarcanerabbit:
Yes. Muahahahha. MUAHHHAHAHHAha! *sncker*
:iconwoozalia:
yes. yes you are.

*ferret cackles*

*waves at Rackle*

Thanks for the :+devwatch: :D


Harena of ~woozalia

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